The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful. The prose flows perfectly - you are a good rhyming poet, and I wish to read more of your work.
03/08/14
Poetically beautiful in every sense.

God bless~
03/12/14
Your poem is lovely. I especially found the descriptive language such as "my sins are scattered on the floor at God's feet" very relatable. Nice job.