The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/14
Great story following the thoughts of the little boy. Good on the Mum for sticking to her time. Well done.
03/11/14
So good! I really enjoyed this entry. Thank you!
God bless~
03/13/14
Congrats! God bless~
03/14/14
It's as though you peered into my home on any given day. Well done and congratulations on the EC!
Very nicely written, Steve.

Your dialogue and the thoughts of the young boy were spot on.

Congratulations on taking second place in the challenge. Good job.

Dusty
03/19/14
I had a few good chuckles at this realistic scenario,like the one minute later time check. I'm not sure if there's a message here, but this is a very enjoyable read. Congratulations on a fine piece of writing and on your EC!