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03/08/14
Oh my heart ached with the beginning of this entry, for the mother...and I loved how tenderly the Nurse took care of the tiny little "baby."

Beautiful job with the topic after the initial story which brings us to the "good news" overall.

Very well done.

God bless~
03/10/14
Well done, and a great take on the topic. A reminder to live our lives in light of our 'end' - eternity.
03/12/14
Your article was quite interesting. Many people might not know that a spontaneous abortion means miscarriage. I know because I nearly had one 33 years ago. My experience helped relate even more to the story with what the nurse was doing. Up carefully crafted this tragic event with sensitivity.

After your story was a beautiful lesson on the beginning, middle, and end phases of life reinforced with lessons from the Bible and words of wisdom from life. Great job. Keep it up
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