The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/14
Very, very clever. I enjoyed the fact the topic was clearly present, but not typed out in an obvious fashion--something I aspire to do one of these days.

Fun poem. thanks for sharing.
03/03/14
I am drooling! - this sounds absolutely delicious! Great fun poem, super rhymes and a lovely easy style to read. Poor Betsy ... I can sympathise!
03/03/14
Smiling wide! Nicely done!

God bless~
03/03/14
Ha! You wrote about me, didn't you? :) But, I'm pretty sure Betsy is a much better baker than I am. I loved every flour-smudged stanza of her story. I think my stomach growled in commiseration with Betsy and the empty-plate ending. Your title is "to-die-for." I love your humor, wit, and creativity with this. <3
03/06/14
Clapping--for Betsy and Verna! Super congrats on your Editor's Choice, dear friend! <3 <3 <3
03/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
03/06/14
Yay, Verna!
*smile* I loved it.
03/06/14
Your word choices, rhythms, and rhymes are amazing - love especially "so tempting" and "preempting". This poem is a delight to read. Congrats on your EC!! :)
Congratulations!! What a fun read!
I would sympathize with all who feel sorry for Betsey - but . . .

She got the batter and frosting bowls . . .

Congratulations, and thank you for your heart for Christ!

Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV