The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/14
Loved this, and the messages, plus scripture based. Well done.

God bless~
03/01/14
Very well written and full of truth and reality. Thanks for sharing.
You did a nice job of retelling this familiar story. The dog linking the wounds really made it real. We just talked about this in Bible study last night. The thing that boggles my mind is even in Hell, the rich man ordered God to warn his bother, Make Lazarus quench my first. It says a lot about the true nature of his heart. Nicely done.
This is very well written. Your descriptions of Lazarus, his wounds, and his hunger painted a vivid image.

I wish you could have continued telling the story when the rich man died instead of referring back to Jesus telling the parable. But maybe I'm being selfish, since I would have liked more of your descriptive story telling.

Great job -- and very possibly the winner.

Dusty
03/06/14
I appreciated your theological precision - that Lazarus was in paradise but not yet in his resurrection body. Jesus of course leaves this frustratingly unclear in his telling.
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