The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/14
Ah, Claire did have it right, but will Freddy actually listen to her? I loved seeing his thoughts as he waited for the plan to take off. It was hilarious to see how he had gotten everything else in life, but that which he really needed. Your title worked really well. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
03/03/14
Such an interesting and well written story. The circumstances drew me in immediately, and I really liked the "open ended close."

Nicely done.

God bless~
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