The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/14
Wow -- I loved this story! It had me from beginning to the very last word!

Well done.

God bless~
02/28/14
A well-told and very credible allegory that would sit well with other children's stories in a series, or as an expansion of itself.
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall.