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11/22/05
After reading several back-to-back "ho hum" stories...I found "And So It Is" a welcome relief! Very enjoyable-and loved the rhthmic finish!
11/24/05
Ok - so this is good - so what? :) (loved the 'I am women' part! - hey I think I loved the whole thing!) :)
How often are we guilty of thinking someone else should do something? How dare they inconvenience us! A delightful piece that had a good moral. Well done.
11/25/05
Enjoyable reading. I admire the fact that she accomplished a task, instead of taking the easy way out--like many often do. Good moral fiber to the story. God bless ya, littlelight
11/26/05
That little poem is pure gold. Perfection!
I really liked the storyline in this, but one thing that stood out to me was the amount of sentences beginning with 'She' or 'Rita'. When I first started at FW, I got the advice to switch it up a little for interest because I did the same thing. I feel like the 'She' police ever since, because now it stands out to me so much. lol

Overall though, this was a cute story and I can relate to her wishing he had done the 'man' work. Sounds just like my sister. She has actually said, "I wish a man was here. Ever notice how something could be hard for you and a guy can do it, just like that?" Maybe I should have her read the ending of this so she could learn something about being a woman! hehehe Good job Anita!
12/05/05
lovely story, very enjoyable read.
God bless and thanks for advice and comments on my piece "Our Love Will Grow"
12/05/05
Can really identify with your character and you've seen inside her heart so well. Great sense of place. Enjoyed the read. Yeggy