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02/14/14
You've captured a parallel to the pride that Cain displayed. Though this death seems to result more from carelessness than from any malice, your GPS/bible analogy is very well expressed.
02/18/14
Very clever use of the topic!
I loved this analogy:
We have a spiritual GPS: the Scripture. - very orginal!

God bless~
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