The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/14
I could feel his passion, frustration, and regret over this dream that never took flight. So much of our life perhaps, mirrors this young lads. I think many lessons can be drawn from his story. I was charmed by the progression of events and felt heartbreak for him in the end. <3
02/18/14
Wow...This poem had a story within a story.

Great writing.

God bless~
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