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02/14/14
Wow, I can see this as a full-length novel. Excellent! You held me in suspense throughout. Gripping, chilling describe the story.
02/16/14
A very powerful commentary that one can almost see fitting into many scenarios today...very well done.

God bless~
I love the visualization you created with your words. I felt as if I were in a courtroom watching the scene play out in front of me. Very dramatic! Very thought-provoking! Excellent!!
02/18/14
Not a farfetched scenario at all, the ways things are going. Captivating read! Well done!
02/23/14
Riveting.
02/25/14
Wow I think this would be a great opening chapter in a novel about how the MC found God. Edgy and as usual had me wanting to read more!