The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - this read like a Sci-fi novel. Excellent writing with a very strong ending. Nicely done!

God bless~
Very interesting and entertaining! The writing had mystery and created anticipation causing this reader to remain intrigued from beginning to end. I like how you gave the dark character a dialect. I found my self trying to imagine the sound of his voice and wondering shy it was there. Well done! I look forward to reading your stories in the future!!!
A thriller for sure! Captivating read! Well done.
Congratulations, Sara!
*shiver* This is an eerie one...but a good read.
Wow, Sawa! Gripping, chilling, I-couldn't-put-it-down writing! He sold his soul. You did super. Many congrats on your EC!!!!