The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/14
Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
02/08/14
I like this story and the descriptions you used. You captured well the hussle-bussle of the city street.

There needs to be spacing between the paragraphs. Also, the dialogue needs to be separated out from the rest of the text.

Great telling of a story. Thank you for sharing.
02/12/14
Good job with the topic at hand...nicely written overall. I enjoyed this.

God bless~