The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/14
Interesting . . .
I was confused about what was going on until I realized she was reading a book. I had to go back and read the beginning over again. Perhaps you could have had Marcie turn a page or something to show the reader that it was a book.
I like how you tied it all together at the end.
02/11/14
Cute little mystery story. I like how you tied the book into real life:)
02/12/14
You had me guessing and thinking and you held my interest...nicely done.

God bless~
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