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02/11/14
Amen to this poem! I Loved this! Captivating—powerful in vision and meaning beginning to end! It pains me how so many disregard the Bible today. It is life and truth beginning to end—God’s Holy word! Terrific job on this! I would hope to see this published beyond Faith Writers.

02/11/14
I loved your poem's progression. It seemed to build with power and the message, much like the Bible does. This is wonderful.
02/12/14
Great stuff. I love acrosstics and this one is bursting with life. I learned a new word too - "xenograph," I think it was. I'll have to reread it with the note at the end.

Nice job and very well written.
02/12/14
Whoops! I reread it and see it's "xenograft." I'll have to check again. This is the kind of poem you want to read and reread, so you don't miss any hidden meanings.
Congratulations on ranking 27 overall! Happy Dance!