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Wow. I think you’ve portrayed well your MC’s introspections. My mom is in an assisted living facility now and your descriptions are right on.
02/09/14
So well portrayed! My 89 years old dad is in a Nursing Home right now and my mother has spent a lot of time there lately recovering from surgery and for rehab, and all they want is to go home. My dad has been in there three years now and he still begs me to take him home. It is so sad. I can imagine how welcome and contagious Ester’s laughter would be—you don’t see a lot of laughter in nursing homes. Well done story
Congratulations on ranking 32 overall!