The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job with this conversation-driven story.
02/09/14
I really enjoying this emotion and drama packed story. Well done!
02/11/14
Fantastic dialog. I really hope this scores well with the judges.
02/12/14
Very touching story. He named his son Ben. Oh the grievances we hold over the years that lead us to regret for never letting them go.

Great lesson to learn here. Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
02/12/14
Wow! This is out of the ballpark. You really nailed it, showing how Ben and Ken, like two inseparable bookends, came together at the end. Great job.
Congratulations on ranking 11 overall!