The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/14
I really enjoyed the atmosphere created in this piece. I could imagine myself there. Really well written.
02/10/14
You created a period of time with your words. Lots of twists and an unexpected ending are all parts of good writing.

Well done. Thanks.
02/13/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
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