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02/10/14
I adore stories about grandchildren, but twins are double the fun and over double the fatigue.

This story is well written and cute as it can be. Well done.

Thanks.
02/11/14
*smile* What's not to love about twin bookends? I loved the childish dialogue.
02/11/14
A sweet well written story.I reminds me of my wife and her doting over the grandkids, and giving the premium position, to their creations, in our Christmas decor.
02/11/14
Very nice story about twin grandchildren. No one ever gets tired hearing about children.

I would suggest a title that would catch the attention of your readers. Also might be good to sum it up with a moral like, don't plan a long day with a 4 year old.

Blessings, LaVonne
02/11/14
Very sweet. My oldest is only 20 months and I'm already looking forward to these times.
02/12/14
Oh, what an adorable story. That must have been perplexing for the both of you. A question? Have they gotten old enough yet to where you now recognize which is which? LOL! This story really tickled me and it is very well-written. Thanks for sharing.

God-bless~
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