The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/05
Full circle ... From knowing the safety surrounded by loved ones to knowing the safety surrounded by Love. Beautiful.
11/24/05
This reads like a Fairy Tale - from childhood to adulthood. Not exactly MY (personal) cup-of-tea...but very well written by a Writer, with a Capital "W"! Nice.
11/25/05
Loved your conclusions-Seasons change, people change, etc..a great ending to a beautiful story. Nice post. God bless ya, littlelight
11/26/05
I nice stroll down your memory lane -well done :)
Absolutely beautiful. You described your memories so vividly that I could almost believe that they were my memories! You obviously have a talent for engaging the reader. Thank you for sharing this - I really enjoyed reading it.
Awww…this brings back so many great memories from my youth. My sled was an old trash can lid that I raced down the wooded knoll behind my house. I just wish I would have taken the handle off as it often hung on a hidden limb buried in the snow, sending me head over hills. Even that was kinda fun, though. Congratulations!