The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/14
Nicely written poem with a good message.

Thanks for sharing.
02/11/14
Great Poem!
Although you mention "bookends" it's not really the theme of your poem.
I do like how your brought out the Gospel, plus the comfort that God gives to us in our needs.
A very nice reminder that "we should start by looking within".

We all can be thankful that when we were baptized for the forgiveness of our sin that we were given God's gift of the Holy Spirit and he is there to help us and lead us in God's way.

Nice work.