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The ending definitely came as a surprise.

Good story---it kept me engaged from beginning to end.
02/03/14
This story breaks my heart because it so reminds me of a family member whose life is exactly like this. Our family has tried to help her. She has lived with some of us in our desire to see her off the streets and set free from this bondage but she always wants to go back. I pray for her often asking God to set her free as well as praying for her safety.

Great fictional story, but it's sad that more often than not it's so true in the lives of so many young women.
02/04/14
Powerful, painful and chilling in its content and delivery. You wrote an excellent story that easily could have been a "true story."

Great writing!

God bless~
I wish I could write like this. You had my heart holding Willow . . .
I have goosebumps right now. I could feel every emotion she was feeling. You told this story so well and the ending - so unexpected and poignant. Love your writing. :)