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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Light at the End of the Tunnel (01/23/14)

TITLE: I'm running toward your light
By ian adams
01/29/14


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I'm Looking in the mirror but it's not really Me with thoughts of the future set with uncertainty Am I to far gone now what have I become Praying to God To not let me succumb but to overcome not rely on this world but only His Grace cause I'll do anything to obtain Him if only just a taste it's just to cold here floating through space make haste God you Child's coming to take His place. Lord i'm coming running toward your light. Armed with Christian might demon's trying to bite but only just to fail. They cannot prevail hurt me or do harm I'm saved by Your Love when you stretched fourth Your arm and held Me by the hand. Through these peaks and valleys to the promise land it was all Your plan You created man. and gave us this Life Redeemed by Your Son Jesus Christ. Now WE have a purpose a Promise to obtain to live for You Father and from sin to abstain, And not be stained or corrupted by the sin, But live through Jesus cause there's Victory in Him , But Live Through Jesus cause there's Victory in Him.


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Judith Gayle Smith02/02/14
Heartfelt prose/praise indeed! I love His Heart within you.

I have a smear of red ink to help. You would make this more readable if you put double lines between the sweetly expressed thoughts. For example:

"I'm Looking in the mirror but it's not really Me
with thoughts of the future set with uncertainty.

Am I too far gone now?
what have I become,
Praying to God
To not let me succumb
but to overcome . . ."

As I read through this again, I see the beautiful poetry flutter its wings to my heart. Thank you.
Beth LaBuff 02/04/14
Judith has good suggestions on formatting, so I'll just comment on the content. Your message was inspiring, hope-filled and uplifting. Thank you!
CD Swanson 02/04/14
Short, yet concise and powerfully moving! I loved it.

Thank you.

God bless~