The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/14
This is beautiful. It creates such a vivid picture. It gave me goosebumps. You did a great job of writing on topic while delivering a great message.
02/04/14
Lovely. Really like the repetition, as well as the meter, which seemed just about perfect. Wonderful message too. Thanks :)
02/05/14
Hauntingly beautiful.

God bless~
02/05/14
Great visuals, great message! Well done!
02/06/14
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall!