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01/31/14
This is a powerful and gripping story, well told. You've done well.
02/04/14
Extremely powerful - vivid descriptions, powerful emotions. Beautiful.

I was thrown a bit when you very briefly switched to Luke's point of view - wondering if you could handle that in a different way.

Excellent piece. Thank you!
This is an awesome take on the topic. You did a wonderful job of building the suspense. I felt as though I was right there, watching it all unfold.
02/05/14
Moving and tender.

God bless~
02/05/14
Captivating story, full of drama and detail. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 16 overall!