The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/14
How terrifying that must have been for you. I have similar experiences, but as of yet they always come in dreams while I am sleeping.

I enjoyed your finely written recount of your real live wide awake nightmare. So glad you found your way back by the glow of that light.

Excellent writing here.
02/02/14
I hope by now that you are flushed with success, but congratulations on such a descriptive portrait of the befuddlement that comes along for the ride when nocturnal demands propel us from warm beds.
02/03/14
Wow, one scary recount of one scary experience.

The fear and confusion is so well portrayed that I felt it with you.
02/04/14
You did an excellent job describing your "night" in this entry. Perhaps you had a "night-time terrors" my friend used to get them all the time, and explain stuff just like you did! She was petrified of them when they happened, albeit infrequent, they happened a good portion of her life.

Thank you for sharing this with us, so sorry for what you went through. I pray it doesn't happen again. And, it's God's hands that will guide you no matter what.

God bless~
02/04/14
When I reached the end where you said it was true, I felt a chill go up my spine. You wrote this terrifying tale so well that I felt the confusion and fear and, because of that, I am so sorry you had to endure those moments. I pray the good Lord uses this experience for His good.