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This story gave me chills, I loved it! The meaning, the message and the innocence of the MC tugged at my heart, and it made me smile at the end!

Well written and a powerful message here...thank you.

God bless~
Amen to CD. Beautifully descriptive writing, with more than a touch of authenticity.
Perfection, sweet perfection from the title to the poignant conclusion ...
I'm just an echo of what has already been said.
Absolutely beautiful. Tender and heart-wrenching, uplifting, sad and happy. It's got the lot! Great story.
What wondrous visions of faith and miracles and love all wrapped in the lines of this beautiful and touching story! Well done!
This is a great story. It shows how kids can be so wise. Your description of her floating reminded me a bit of Astral projection, but unlike that, Jesus' presence made such a difference. Things like this happen more than we can imagine, yet so many feel reluctant to believe. You did a great job with this, totally nailing the topic with a fresh POV.
Congratulations on ranking 31 overall!
Hi Lynn!

I meant to tell you how much I enjoyed this article. you are a super writer, and nothing less!