The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 302 times
Member Comments
This is a good story, well told, very interesting, insightful and encouraging.

Thanks for sharing.
The title captured my attention and the story was a blessing to read. Well done.
Grabbed my attention and held it throughout. What a sweet story . . .
What a beautiful story...I loved it!

This was fabulous and so amazingly written.

God bless~
I like the reality of this story. It demonstrates how seriously out of touch we can be caught in the clutches of materialism . . .
Congratulations on placing 3rd. Great job!

God bless~
Oh I love this. You did such a brilliant job of painting a picture while delivering a great message.Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 16 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
I forgot my happy dance. Happy Dance!!