The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story had be going back in time, until that is, the cell phone came out.

Without that it could be a timeless story. With the cell phone, it is up to date as yesterday.
What a great story! Your characters are very real "nubby fingers" !
Bless you!
I meant fingernail!
01/29/14
This multi-layered piece had a lot to offer in terms of meaning and content. Nicely done.

God bless~
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