The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/14
Poems aren't my strength, but I will say you told a wonderful story of how God makes ends meet.

Thanks for sharing.
01/27/14
Just lovely - really like the refrain, and the message throughout. So much powerful imagery. Thanks!
01/27/14
What a beautiful poem!

God bless~
01/27/14
Compelling and mesmerizing and filled with praise and love for our Lord.

Great job!

God bless~
01/27/14
Wow you do know how to tell a great story in your poetry! This is one of those that speaks deep down in the soul. I enjoyed this!
01/28/14
Well done! Love the word pictures:)
01/28/14
You wrote-
In one hand He holds
the perfection of grace,
knowing our pain
while beholding Godís Face.
His other hand holding
our sin-scarlet threads,
while pleading with us
to again seek His place

WOW that is one of the most beautiful word pictures I have ever beheld!
01/29/14
Amen and Amen. Great message
01/29/14
You and words go so well together. This poem is well crafted and has a great message. Well done!
Congratulations on ranking 7 in your level! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
02/04/14
Wow, Praise God This is amazing I love this
Thank you