The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/14
This is a fine Villanelle. Loved every line of it. What a joy to read. Very well done!
01/27/14
I like the repeating words. It's almost like a song.
I'm not sure of the concept though, because It's different than I understood the verse to mean. Maybe it's just the way I'm reading it.
Actually, I like poems that make me think... that make me read them over again to understand the meaning between the lines.
01/29/14
This poem definitely goes deep. It begins and ends very well, for an excellent message.

A couple places were a little confusing at first, but after rereading it, I understood what you meant. The notes at the bottom are much appreciated.
01/29/14
A deeply prolific poem that I truly embraced.

God bless~
01/29/14
Wow! Wow! Wow! How fantastic. I just looked up the definition of Villanelle and you followed the description perfectly.

Congratulations on a scrupulous entry!!
Congratulations on ranking 27 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)