The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/14
I love it. Hits me where I live and you end it perfectly. Good job on this one.
01/23/14
I don't often comment on poems, but this one is fun to read and it has a good message.

The last line is clever.
Thanks for sharing.
01/26/14
Thanks for sharing your personal struggle with sanctification. Keep writing...
Thank you for speaking my heart . . .
01/27/14
Beautiful!

God bless~