The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/14
Great imagery woven through this poem. I really liked how your title fit with the last repeating line--very evocative.

The ending verses were my favorite. Thanks for sharing!
I can so totally relate with the MC. I've been on that dark endless sea with each wave bouncing my tenuous grip. Then like in your piece, Jesus came along and rescued me. It;s not always easy but I know he is always there.