The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/14
Sad story, but with hope at the end. Well done. Thank you.
01/22/14
What a sad, but beautiful, story! The flashbacks could have flowed better. They were a bit choppy. But I was glad there was a happy ending. This would be a great novel.
01/22/14
Such a heart touching sad read, but I love that it ends on a message of hope! Beautifully done!
Congratulations on ranking 26 overall!