The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm glad Cammi got to hear the truth. It sounds like she's got quite a stressful life.

Great details and word choice in the opening lines--I loved the word "portended" it made me smile. Nice take on the topic.
This is brilliant! Oh I think this is one of my all-time favorite. You did a splendid job of creating the conflict right off. I could feel Cami's pain. I still have goosebumps. It's an outstanding modern adaptation of the story of Jesus at the well. Outstanding. Congratulations on placing 4th in level three and 22 overall!