The Official Writing Challenge
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This is absolutely fantastic. What a testimony! Just beautiful.
Perfect rhyme, perfect meter, perfect flow. Strong message that I can relate to. This should do really well. Thanks for sharing this awesome piece.
Endless life...only by the grace of Jesus. A different take on God washing away the sins of man. Well said, I enjoyed your poem.
A vision of Grace. This reminds me of Psalm 103:17: “But the mercy of the LORD is from everlasting to everlasting…” Great job, wonderful read!
What a beautiful poem. Rhyming, flow, and meter is excellent as far as I can tell. I am not that great with poetry, but love to read ones like this. The message came out loud and clear. Great entry!

Blessings, LaVonne
A poem crammed full of life's endless happenings and the pain they bring. With help coming from Him who knows the solutions. Thanks or this meaningful poem.
Wow. I became a glutton while reading this as I gobbled up every line. Wonderful.
I loved this. Wonderful poetry. I especially enjoyed the last lines beginning with endless.