The Official Writing Challenge
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It wasn't the ending I expected. I was kind of hoping he would stick with the farmer job. It's true though that if you do more than is expected of you, God will promote you to a higher position.

I though it was well written. I know what hard work is on the farm when you do your best. Your descriptions made me feel like I was there.

Blessing, LaVonne
Well done indeed. An engrossing story, terrific descriptions and tensions. I so love happy endings!
Congratulations on your fine win! Well deserved. I have moved on up to Masters where I am sure I will be swallowed up by the sharks, please join me. You belong there. This is just excellent writing.
I love this. You pulled me in right away and I was totally immersed in the story to the end. I thought it was a take on the parable Jesus told about the three men who were given money by their Master. It is a powerful thing and is nice to see that God is there in our prayers and hears them. The only suggestion I have is tiny. Because this is an international site, I'd encourage you to write out Oklahoma because not everyone would recognise it as OK. You also did a great job of weaving the topic and sprinkling it all over the story. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 13 overall. Happy Dance!!
Congratulation on your well deserved placement. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your submission.