The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely images and great rhythm scattered through this poem. I liked the way it flowed to the end, your ending lines were actually my favorite.

Good job! Thanks for sharing.
This is lovely. Flashes of pictures flicker through my mind as I read. I know it may have been a stylistic approach to enhance the endless feel, but I do wonder if not having that precious white space overwhelmed some. I'm grateful I found it or closer to the truth, I say that I'm thankful God led me here.