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01/18/14
There were lots of great lines in this poem, but I thought the last one took the cake.

I really enjoyed the "one and on" approach too. A great read that is worth going over quite a few times as a devotional.
01/18/14
He forever goes on oozing oil on parched soil is a thought that comforts and inspires.

This is an excellent poem that speaks of all His promises and glory. Absolutely divine!
01/18/14
Perfect title for the topic!
01/18/14
Perfect title for the topic!

While some of your word choices made me pause, I loved your emphasis on the never-ending attributes of God.
01/19/14
Inspiring material that opens our eyes to God's greatness, without trashing mankind's value with an "I am a worm" emphasis, but draws out God's grace as he searches us out. Well done.
01/19/14
Love, grace, righteousness, holiness - that covers just about everything in one beautiful poem. I also like the one and on in each verse.

Blessings, LaVonne
01/19/14
Love the refrain with variation that begins each stanza.

Remarkable word choices -- quite vivid.

Enjoyed!
So descriptive of His grace. A wonderful read. Thank you.
01/22/14
Love how you have given vision to God’s eternal attributes. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall!
"Of which man is so blatantly undeserving..." That's a great line and so true. I look at the depravity of our world, consider His continuous Grace and am amazed and humbled that He's even still mindful of us.