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There were lots of great lines in this poem, but I thought the last one took the cake.

I really enjoyed the "one and on" approach too. A great read that is worth going over quite a few times as a devotional.
He forever goes on oozing oil on parched soil is a thought that comforts and inspires.

This is an excellent poem that speaks of all His promises and glory. Absolutely divine!
Perfect title for the topic!
Perfect title for the topic!

While some of your word choices made me pause, I loved your emphasis on the never-ending attributes of God.
Inspiring material that opens our eyes to God's greatness, without trashing mankind's value with an "I am a worm" emphasis, but draws out God's grace as he searches us out. Well done.
Love, grace, righteousness, holiness - that covers just about everything in one beautiful poem. I also like the one and on in each verse.

Blessings, LaVonne
Love the refrain with variation that begins each stanza.

Remarkable word choices -- quite vivid.

So descriptive of His grace. A wonderful read. Thank you.
Love how you have given vision to God’s eternal attributes. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall!
"Of which man is so blatantly undeserving..." That's a great line and so true. I look at the depravity of our world, consider His continuous Grace and am amazed and humbled that He's even still mindful of us.