The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely loved this entry! Very fun to read with the rhythm and flow, great, positive message. Liked how we could see the daughter grow and mature thru the years. Also liked the how the ending came back to the beginning. Great job!
01/19/14
Oh, if we all remembered, to always wear our ďrose colored glasses!Ē What a gift this mother passed to her daughter! Delightful read, powerful message!
Glad to see this placed well. I really like it! Great job--keep writing!
01/23/14
I truly enjoyed this endearing poem, and liked the progression from little girl to woman-- and the passing on of her mother's positive outlook to her child as the poem concludes. Glad this one placed high--congrats.
02/06/14
Carolyn, YAY, and congratulations. I'm catching up on reading entries and was delighted to see your name. Good job, dear lady, and God bless!