The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/14
I’d love to have your input into the free writing lessons available on the FaithWriters forums. This week’s lesson is on writing devotionals, and next week will cover writing on topic for the weekly challenge. Look for it at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67, or if you’re on Facebook, you can “like” Faithwriters Writing Lessons.
01/10/14
Thank you for this uplifting and beautiful devotional.

God bless~
01/13/14
My favorite image here is that of sitting at the Lord's feet. Absolutely precious.

I wonder if you'd consider an experiment, just to see if you like it: change the "we" and "us" in the first paragraph to "I," and include some specific examples. Then, at the end, change the "we" to "you." I'm thinking that this would give your devotional a more personal touch for your reader.

There's certainly nothing wrong with the way you've written this, and your writing is strong.
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