The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt a part of the Bible Study! So real. . .

Please "throw a brick" for others to enjoy, comment and support your writing:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37705

Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
This is a cute story. You did a nice job of developing the characters and the dialog flowed naturally.

I noticed your first two sentences started with the same word. Also remember that when using Daddy as a name to start with a capital.

Your message is a strong one. Prayer does work. We all need to have the faith of a child.

You may want to check out Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards. She gives great advice for all levels of writers.

Thanks for sharing your delightful story. Precious really was precious.