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12/12/13
This s a great read. It's warm, it's fun, it's sad and it's challenging - without becomin Santamonious. Well done.
This is beautiful yet sad because I understand the amount of truth. Having said that, I think I'd prefer partying with those precious people over most any snooty party that is going on. There is so much that can be learned from your characters. Brilliant writing.
12/13/13
Wonderful read, wonderful message! Yes, we can truly learn by observing the peace and joy of the innocent who know how to truly live in the moment, stripped of prejudice and pride and false pretense. I truly believe God put “disabled” souls here, not for us to teach them, but for us to learn from them! This could have been a true story, for it is amazing what we can observe and learn in the most unlikely places. Great job on this!
What a scrumptious read! Thank you for the delight . . .

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Ah - modernity. How soon before black becomes the new bridal attire? I enjoyed this, while saddened by it . . .

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Oops! Senior moment! My second comment was not meant for your piece . . .
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall! Happy Dance!!