The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 437 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
This is beautiful. You managed to capture so many wild thoughts bouncing around my brain. I've had a really bad day and your words are working miracles in my hurt heart. I see God's fingerprints all over this and no matter what else happens, you helped lighten my heavy heart. God bless.
Colorful, original! Delightful . . .

Please "throw a brick" for others to enjoy, comment and support your writing:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37705

Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
12/17/13
Thanks for a good fun read, with its own positive message gently tucked in at the end. Unlike a pinata, which it's hard to break gently.
So imaginative! Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Love & Hugs in, through and because of Jesus, the Christ,

Judi Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
12/19/13
This is such a fun poem, which turns to poignant at the end. I love it, Nancy. I keep a file folder of Faithwriters' Stories and Poems that touch me, and this one is definitely going into it.

Congratulations on your high rating. Your poem deserves it.
Congratulations. Happy Dance.

01/04/14
Great piece of unique and confounding work. I was lost for a bit but through no unintended fault of yours. It occasionally takes more than logically necessary to penetrate this confused soul.
Nice job.