The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is stunning. Every word has a distinct purpose. It's perfect take on the topic and left me with goosebumps.
12/14/13
Just wonderfully done, powerful and packed with emotion! Her words/your words, masterfully painted sadness turned to beauty!
This will bring many to tears - for many reasons. Beautiful . . .

Please "throw a brick" for others to enjoy, comment and support your writing:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37705

Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
Exquisite, heartwarming! Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Love & Hugs in, through and because of Jesus, the Christ,

Judi Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
12/19/13
Charla, your poem has left me in tears. Both as an oncology nurse who has cared for so many dying patients and as a cancer survivor myself, your words hit me hard. I felt every nuance deep in my soul.

You have a gift from God. With words you painted - a picture so profound it gives me goosebumps. Receiving a spot in Editor's Choice is well-deserved.
01/07/14
Oh just stunning in its simplicity of complexity.

So much illustrated in so few words.
You did an amazing job picking each and every one for maximum impact. Loved it!