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Wow! This is astonishing. I feel like somehow you've been listening to my inner dialog. If I could write beautiful poetry, these could have been my own words. The only red ink I have is tiny, but I think it'd be more powerful if you hadn't switched to the universal you in the last few stanzas. These are powerful words no matter what and I understand why you switched to you. It might have been clearer if you used quotation marks around the words they said. But for me personally, when I read it the next time I feel unworthy, I think I'll read it like this:
They said all thatís needed
is everyday to pray.
Even if most the time
I fail in every way.

His forgiveness everlasting
makes me whiter than the snow.
No matter where my travel leads
I know that God will go.

He will hear all my prayers
and never wear a frown.
Cover me with His wings
stand me on Holy Ground.

Wow! This is just perfect and the timing of you writing these words this week and me reading them just this second, has God's fingerprints all over it. Thank you for being obedient to God; you have blessed me immensely.
12/14/13
Wonderful poem. Thank you for the message here.
Precious. This is just lovely . . .

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Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV