The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job! Loved the entire entry.

God bless~
I love how you stay focused on Daniel's reaction here and not so much on Thomas' sin. We all will have Thomas type people in our lives, but God calls us to be accountable for ourselves and allowing others to stir us to anger is sin itself.

I love your pace and your turn of phrase, especially the one about a hurricane in his soul. Powerful.

Great job!
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