The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/13
A clever use of the topic at hand. Nicely done with the well known biblical story, interesting POV in how you've crafted it.

God bless~
12/05/13
Very clever and creative POV on a scripture that stayed well-hidden for just long enough. I like how you maintained your MC's integrity even while shifting his attitude around. Well done.
12/12/13
YAY and hooray for you, Jack! Love this. Congratulations!
His seething rage is palpable! Terrific, and congratulations!
12/18/13
Spectacularly described POV. I was clueless to the MC for a good portion of the story, wow great job with this one!