The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/13
Great story! I enjoyed the suspense you created with this twist on the theme.
11/30/13
Very nice! This is well written and suspenseful. You had me on the edge of my seat about what was going to happen next.

Excellent job!
12/02/13
A completely compelling and well written tale! Excellent work.

God bless~
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