The Official Writing Challenge
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You've done well with this gripping and moving story. It was easy to identify with Nadine and her fears. I enjoyed reading it.
Excellent story, great characters and told compellingly and patiently. I love how you let it unfold and resisted the temptation to tell us too much early. There was a little bit of that in Sam's speech, but with a limited word count, it was either that or sacrifice more of your opening drama with Nadine on the run, and I wouldn't sacrifice that part of the story for anything.

Great, great job. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
Great work!

God bless~